More proofreading Journey Steps

I’ve managed to identify some more (very) minor typos in a range of journey steps (still plenty more to go through :wink: ) - most are just cases of missing a space between a full stop and the initial letter of the following sentence, though there are a few that are different (first ones in Chapter 4, 5 and 6)

Chapter 1
Kick - after completion - line 4 - missing space - “…behind it.Beware…”

Chapter 2
Spend Knowledge Points - after completion - line 4 - missing space - “things.There’s…”

Perform a heavy finisher with a weapon - after completion - line 5 - missing space - “…definitive blow.Woe be…”

Chapter 4
Show your religious zeal - after completion - says “Your rudimentary acts of zealotry were enough to create physical manifestations of the favor of the gods…” - but the journey step is completed just by crafting the religious tool and does not produce a manifestation of zeal.

Chapter 5
Obtain the head of a boss creature - before completion - final sentence says “Kill one of the unusually large creatures that do the Exiled Lands and take its head.” - Do what? Possibly should be “…that dwell in the Exiled Lands”?

Fire a trebuchet - after completion - line 4 - missing space - “…machine.War…”

Climb the Tower of Bats - after completion - line 2 - missing space - “…Bats.Time…”
line 3 - missing word - probably ‘has’ - “Time to find out if this place [has] anything of value to you at all.”

Scout a black hand camp - after completion - line 5 - missing space - “Lands.You…”

Chapter 6
Modify a piece of armor - after completion - line 4, word 2 - “your” should be “you’re”

Sunder an enemy - after completion - line 4 - missing space - “weakness.You…”

Make an enemy bleed - after completion - line 4 - missing space - “…you.You…”

Use an explosive - before completion - line 6 - missing space - “…create it.Here…”

Scout a Dogs of the Desert Camp - before completion - line 7 - missing space - “humans.There…”

Lure an enemy into a trap - before completion - line 3 - missing space - “…smarter.You’ve…”

Chapter 7
Recruit a unique thrall - after completion - line 4 - missing space - “side.Willing…”

Survive a purge - after completion - line 3 - missing space - “…destroyed.But…”

Survive a sandstorm outside of shelter - after completion - line 4 - missing space - “…ingenuity.You…”

More when I have more time :slight_smile:

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