[#spellchekker] The Iron Serpent description. plural, past tense


The ancients used to travel in carts that ran along iron tracks that stretches in all directions.(1)

  • “stretches” should be “stretch” or “stretched” imo, as the sentence is plural and in past tense. (“iron tracks” - “used to” / “ran”)

The second “that” (“that stretches”) could also be a “which” - this may create some variation in the wording and may or may not be more appropriate.

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