A Helluva Point (2018) - A Graphic Novel By HolloPoint


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This is the revamped version (2018) of the follow up story I did to “The Return to Outpost 94”, just at the inception of SWL.

A link for “The Return to Outpost 94” in these Forums, should you wish to read in order:

Special thanks to Ezgadi of ODO for the title for the novel.

I hope you enjoy over several beverages, this one is a bit longer that “The Return to Outpost 94”.

Any comments feel free, I’m still learning.


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Chapter 01


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Chapter 02


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Chapter 03


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Chapter 04


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Chapter 05


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Chapter 06


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Chapter 07


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Chapter 08


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Chapter 09


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Chapter 10


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Chapter 11


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Chapter 12


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Chapter 13


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Chapter 14


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Chapter 15


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Chapter 16


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Chapter 17


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Chapter 18


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I have just had someone say effectively “it’s sexist tosh”. I suppose I should explain the direction of the story in some parts, I can see how it comes across that way. I have a pretty satirical sense of humour, the “sexist” parts were my attempt at humour and a massive p*ss take on that type of genre. I suppose since they don’t know me they are taking the story at face value, without being able to read into it the direction I wanted to portray. I’m kinda, blown out the water, but they tried to be constructive and suggest authors I should look at.

For anyone browsing this way, I’m not sexist and it was an attempt at humour. I got very wound up in the technical aspects of doing this, and it’s come across as bad story telling to this person, perhaps they are right. I’ll think about it.

Anyway, thanks for all the views, I’m kinda at the “WTF” stage atm. I’m not going to do a re-write, but damn. If that is how it has come across then it has been written badly.

There is a final chapter to come though, I’ll post after I check for errors.