Game mode: [Any]
Type of issue: [Misc - English Locale]
Server type: [All]
There are numerous typos and the data tables could use a grammar pass. For example there are roughly 70-80 double spaces between words in the item and recipe tables and sentences that are missing a space after a period in journey texts and subtitles, an example would be the text below and what it should be.
body behind it.Beware the mighty kick -> body behind it. Beware the mighty kick
you feel stiff and sore.Your concern -> you feel stiff and sore. Your concern
armor, which your certain is a useful skill to have. -> armor, which you’re certain is a useful skill to have.
dangerous place.You half-remember fragments -> dangerous place. You half-remember fragments
how to make things.There’s a certain pleasure -> how to make things. There’s a certain pleasure
balance and counterbalance.There is a light -> balance and counterbalance. There is a light
end quickly.Your eyes -> end quickly. Your eyes
definitive blow.Woe be to your enemies. -> definitive blow. Woe be to your enemies.
Destroy the Abyssal Remnant -> Destroy the Abysmal Remnant
Other suggestions include
Item Title Capitalization/Consistency Fixes
Double bed -> Double Bed
Iron bowl -> Iron Bowl
Iron jug -> Iron Jug
Ornate ceramic jug -> Ornate Ceramic Jug
Snake idol -> Snake Idol
Improved Preservation box -> Improved Preservation Box
Preservation box -> Preservation Box
White rhinoceros -> White Rhinoceros
Bracelet removal quest item consistency (all others have a double line break for specifying it’s needed to unlock the bracelet)
Xel-ha.\nThis is one of the artefacts -> Xel-ha.\n\nThis is one of the artefacts
north.\nThis is one of the artefacts -> north.\n\nThis is one of the artefacts
Journey/Consistency Fixes
Destroy the Abyssal Remnant -> Destroy the Abysmal Remnant
NPC Title Capitalization/Consistency Fixes
Daicas the sharp -> Daicas the Sharp
Ghamm the worn -> Ghamm the Worn
Gnash the hungry -> Gnash the Hungry
Jon the tinkerer -> Jon the Tinkerer
M’aath the fleshtearer -> M’aath the Fleshtearer
Manos, the handful -> Manos the Handful
Risa the brutal -> Risa the Brutal
Secas the smith -> Secas the Smith
Silas the weathered -> Silas the Weathered
Spinas the marauder -> Spinas the Marauder
Vais the wayfaerer -> Vais the Wayfaerer
Nordheimer Priest I -> Ymir Priest
Nordheimer Priest II -> Ymir High Priest
Nordheimer Priest III -> Ymir Archpriest
Amzadi the wanderer -> Amzadi the Wanderer
Eina the light -> Eina the Light
Kelvan the bringer of Suffering -> Kelvan the Bringer of Suffering
Makiela Hide ripper -> Makiela Hide-ripper
Oisun the smith -> Oisun the Smith
Ulrik the mountaineer -> Ulrik the Mountaineer
Werk of the lost tribe -> Werk of the Lost Tribe
Yakinu The Lacerator -> Yakinu the Lacerator
Yorik heir of the North -> Yorik, Heir of the North
Donia , Keeper of the Riddle of Steel -> Donia, Keeper of the Riddle of Steel
Kaud the Leather-worker -> Kaud the Leatherworker
Moryn , Dye-master -> Moryn, Dye-master
Pelor the well-travelled -> Pelor the Well-travelled
Dina, Master huntress -> Dina, Master Huntress
Other
The description on the “Black Ice Pick” and “Acheronian Pick” should describe the item as a pick and not a pickaxe
